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    Value Proposition for Ground Transportation
    Vin Bali
    Participant
    Jan 13, 2024

    Remove stress and enjoy life more when booking ground transportation, your travel is guaranteed to be stress free or your next ride is on us.

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    Will Barron
    Keymaster
    Jan 17, 2024
    Will Barron Jan 17, 2024

    Remove stress and enjoy life more when booking ground transportation, your travel is guaranteed to be stress free or your next ride is on us.

    I think you can simplify this (and make it more catchy) –

    “Zero stress ground transportation in [LOCATION] or your next ride is free.”

    #9516414
    Vin Bali
    Participant
    Jan 17, 2024
    Vin Bali Jan 17, 2024

    That is great!  Thank you!  Is there a different word to use or set it up without offering a free ride?

    #9516437
    Will Barron
    Keymaster
    Jan 22, 2024
    Will Barron Jan 22, 2024

    That is great! Thank you! Is there a different word to use or set it up without offering a free ride?

    I was just going off what you mentioned in the first post.

    If you want to be less specific (also less specific from a legal standpoint too as this can be clarified in your Term and Conditions) then you could say –

    “Zero stress ground transportation in [LOCATION], guaranteed.”

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