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Sep 10, 2024 #9518166Value PropositionOlivia HorneParticipantSep 10, 2024
“We help global businesses unify their fragmented international payroll processes under one platform. Cloudpay means easy access to accurate and timely data, unlike other providers who still rely on siloed systems.”
Sep 15, 2024 #9518170Will BarronKeymasterSep 15, 2024Will Barron Sep 15, 2024“We help global businesses unify their fragmented international payroll processes under one platform. Cloudpay means easy access to accurate and timely data, unlike other providers who still rely on siloed systems.”
Pretty good. I think you can potential simplify it further –
We help businesses unify fragmented international payroll processes under one platform. We provide easy access to accurate data, unlike other providers who rely on many separate systems.
Do your buyers care about simplifying their processes and accurate data? If so then this is strong.
If there is something that you think they care more about, then that should be included in the value prop.
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