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  • #9516819
    Value prop for proctoring software
    Marco Stefani
    Participant
    Apr 13, 2024

    Emoj Proctoring helps IT managers reduce false-positives and system crashes, save on server costs, and generate positive consensus from administration, professors, and students with custom-built, proprietary code run on AWS cloud tailored to specific organizational requirements.

    #9516830
    Marco Stefani
    Participant
    Apr 16, 2024
    Marco Stefani Apr 16, 2024

    Any takers for constructive criticism?

    #9516838
    Will Barron
    Keymaster
    Apr 17, 2024
    Will Barron Apr 17, 2024

    Emoj Proctoring helps IT managers reduce false-positives and system crashes, save on server costs, and generate positive consensus from administration, professors, and students with custom-built, proprietary code run on AWS cloud tailored to specific organizational requirements.

    Hey Marco, it’s way too complicated.

    Couple of thoughts –

    • Value props usually work better when they are positioned as “I” or “we” help rather than the company name.
    • Is it possible to be more specific with false-positives OR system crashes OR save on server costs?
    • Can you focus on the benefits for either students OR professors?
    • Can you use less industry jargon?

    The closer you can get to “we help X, solve Y, with Z” the more effect it will be.

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