[Stuart Summers]

New First Email in Cadence – thoughts?

Stuart Summers

Participant

Apr 17, 2023

Hi Will & Community,

I’m putting together a first touch point for businesses who have zero focus on reviews at this moment in time. Would love your thoughts on the below. This person did actually book a demo so I’m definitely on the right tracks, but still open to thoughts before I scale it.
<p style=”font-weight: 400;”>Hi Mariana,</p>
I notice when I search “Apex Advice Group reviews” in google there’s no reviews coming up.

If someone recommends Apex Advice Group as a good business, it means that person has limited ability to verify and research further. This could mean they don’t end up contacting you.

At Trustpilot we help you use public reviews to build trust and stand out in paid and organic search.

Does it make sense to jump on a call with the right person to discuss further?

Kind Regards,

PS have a read of how Wisr had a 41% and 30% referral traffic lift in the last 2 years.

[Will Barron]

Will Barron

Keymaster

Apr 18, 2023

Will Barron Apr 18, 2023

There was a little jumbling of words and I didn’t understand the second line. How about something like this –

Stuart Summers wrote:

Hi NAME,

I noticed when I Googled “Apex Advice Group reviews” that there are no reviews.

This means that your potential customers have limited ability to verify your business and do their research before contacting you.

At Trustpilot we help you use public reviews to build trust and stand out in paid and organic search.

Would it make sense to jump on a call to see if this is something that might help?

Kind Regards,

NAME

PS here’s how Wisr had a 41% and 30% referral traffic lift in the last 2 years.

The PS doesn’t really relate to search engine traffic. I’d replace that with a case study more specific to the body of the email if you have one.

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