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    How to approach fellow members in a new organisation
    Stuart Summers
    Dec 3, 2023

    Hey Will,

    Trustpilot have just joined FintechNZ and part of the partnership offering is access to this pretty cool Mind Map of other member businesses.

    The Director who is our contact there, said although he won’t push intros, we’re welcome to reach out to any other members who we think might be suited to our services.

    However, I’m not 100% sure how to lead with a first email, both with subject line, but also first opening line or two.

    If I was approaching them cold, based on what I can see of them, I’d lead with the following first touch email. Would you mind assisting with some changes to the subject line and opening lines with the above in mind please;

    Subject Line:-

    Will – Your Reviews

    Hi Will,

    I notice the reviews on your website aren’t 3rd party.

    Public 3rd party reviews may not be a priority for you right now, but they can increase on site conversion by on average 23%.

    Would you like me to show you how to start?


    Will Barron
    Dec 11, 2023
    Will Barron Dec 11, 2023

    We covered this on the group coaching call last week.

    Linking here for anyone who finds this at a later date – https://app.salesman.com/Community/topic/group-coaching-07-12-23-pm/

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