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  • #7510716
    First email in cadence – feedback
    Jozef Gajdos
    Participant
    Feb 2, 2023

    Hi guys,
    sharing my first email draft.
    I would be grateful for any feedback.
    Thanks.
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    Background: X-ios and Y-android are the names of payment libraries of the target company

    Subject: Alternative payment methods in your X/Y SDKs?

    Hi {!FirstName},

    it looks like your frames-android and X-ios SDKs don’t support any alternative payment methods.
    This means you are not able to offer a localized payment strategy to your merchants.
    Is this something you might be interested to fix?

    Recently we helped XYZ to add Przelewy24, AliPay, and PayPal to their mobile payment SDKs.
    And currently, we’re adding Sofort, Ratepay, Bizum, Blik, and iDeal.

    Happy to provide more info if you’re interested.
    Just reply “yes”.

    Best.
    Jozef

    #7510718
    Jozef Gajdos
    Participant
    Feb 2, 2023
    Jozef Gajdos Feb 2, 2023

    Version 2

    Hi {!FirstName},

    it looks like your X-android and Y-ios SDKs don’t support any alternative payment methods.
    This means you are not able to offer a localized checkout experience.
    Is this something you might be interested to fix?

    Recently we helped XYZ to add Przelewy24, AliPay, and PayPal to their mobile payment SDKs.
    And currently, we’re adding Sofort, Ratepay, Bizum, Blik, and iDeal.

    Happy to provide more info if you’re interested.
    Just reply “yes”.

    Best.
    Jozef

    #7510722
    Will Barron
    Keymaster
    Feb 6, 2023
    Will Barron Feb 6, 2023

    Hey Jozef, decent first attempt. Thoughts –

    – Have one call to action rather than two
    – “This means you are not able to offer a localized checkout experience” – Go deeper. Why should they care?
    – As it’s the first email in the cadence, I’d go with a stronger CTA

    Hi [NAME],

    It looks like X-android and Y-ios SDKs don’t support alternative payments.

    We help fintech organizations implement payment SDK’s whilst reducing their complexity and costs.

    For example, we recently helped XYZ to add Przelewy24, AliPay, and PayPal to their mobile payment SDKs.

    And we’re also contracted to add Sofort, Ratepay, Bizum, Blik, and iDeal.

    Would it make sense to jump on a quick call to see if there’s an opportunity for us to help [COMPANY] too?

    Best.

    #8010751
    Jozef Gajdos
    Participant
    Feb 10, 2023
    Jozef Gajdos Feb 10, 2023

    Hi.
    Another email in cadence.
    What do you think?

    Hi {!FirstName},

    it appears there are plans to support APMs in the upcoming releases of Frames SDKs.

    And it also seems there is just 1 iOS and 1 Android developer contributing to your GitHub repositories.

    In case you need any help with that just let me know.

    We have the exact expertise you’re looking for, having already implemented different APMs for [XYZ].

    We can save you time and money.

    Please let me know if you’d like more details.

    Best.
    Jozef

    #8010752
    Jozef Gajdos
    Participant
    Feb 10, 2023
    Jozef Gajdos Feb 10, 2023

    Sorry, there is no way to update my previous post, so I’m creating a new one.
    I watched the last coaching call and updated the CTA.

    Hi {!FirstName},

    it appears there are plans to support APMs in the upcoming releases of Frames SDKs.

    And it also seems there is just 1 iOS and 1 Android developer contributing to your GitHub repositories.

    In case you’d like to speed up your time to market, we might be able to help.

    We already implemented different APMs for [XYZ] and have the exact expertise to save you time and money.

    Would it be useful if I send over a quick video to explain what we’ve done?

    Best.
    Jozef

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