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First Cold Email for Review
Subject Line: Congrats [NAME]!
Hi [NAME],
I saw [COMPANY] acquired [COMPANY] last month – congrats!
Many CTOs told me they are frustrated by outdated systems that slow everything down, especially post acquisition!
They just want their operations to run smoothly, with automation taking care of the manual work and compliance in real-time.
We help them by automating core IT functions so they can focus on driving innovation, just like we helped Barclays, Allianz and WorldPay.
Would it make sense to grab a 10 minute virtual coffee this week and see if we can do the same for you?
Thanks,
Klaudia
Decent email!
Personalised against a trigger event which is good.
Can you be more specific about a single core IT function that they’d be MOST interest in talking about?
The more specific the better if you want to separate yourself from all the other emails.
Feel free to test the “virtual coffee” but I think it sounds a little cheesy. Are you there to solve a painful business problem or are you there to chit chat?
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