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    Content Sign up First Email Touch Point
    Stuart Summers
    Participant
    May 12, 2023

    Hi Will,

    following on from the coaching call, keen to get your input on this email I put together. There were several different content pieces that various prospects have downloaded. (they needed to add their email address and phone number to get the article).

    So I’ll need to adjust the link and second paragraph accordingly. But eager on your feedback on this particular one;

    Hi {{first_name}},

    I noticed you downloaded our article on Reviews fraud

    Are fake or negative reviews a concern that’s held you back from building digital social proof through 3rd party public reviews in the past?

    I’d be happy to explain how you can safely create a Trustpilot profile to build trust in your brand and stand out in paid and organic search.

    Does it make sense to jump on a call to show you how to build this asset?

    Kind Regards,

    #9011306
    Stuart Summers
    Participant
    May 12, 2023
    Stuart Summers May 12, 2023

    Not sure why its come out looking like that. I’ll try again;

    Hi George,
    I noticed you downloaded our article on Reviews fraud.
    Are fake or negative reviews a concern that’s held you back from building digital social proof through 3rd party public reviews in the past?
    I’d be happy to explain how you can safely create a Trustpilot profile to build trust in your brand and stand out in paid and organic search.
    Does it make sense to jump on a call to show you how to build this asset?

    Kind Regards,

    #9011961
    Avtar Cheema
    Participant
    May 29, 2023
    Avtar Cheema May 29, 2023

    (here is my two pence worth)

    Hi George,

    was that download a good read? Reviews fraud.

    When building digital social proof through a 3rd party, poor reviews can cause you to hesitate.

    Killer question is, how do you build trust without getting burnt?

    You and me, we can safely create a Trustpilot profile that builds trust in your brand. Helping it to stand out in paid and organic searches.
    Does it make sense to jump on a call to show you how?

    thanks

    #9012031
    Will Barron
    Keymaster
    May 30, 2023
    Will Barron May 30, 2023

    Hey Stuart, since the move from .org to .com last week, your messages shouldn’t have the weird formatting moving forward.

    I think your message is fine.

    You’ve probably tested it by now. How is it going?

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