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    Closing Email
    Kevin Steward
    Participant
    Apr 13, 2023

    I have a new logo business deal, of significant size. The quote is now in the hands of the decision maker (as of yesterday) and we heard from our re-seller that the customer is looking to move forward on the quote.

    Closing email : “Hello, our quote we provided is valid through the end of the month, what would be your timing for moving forward? “

    #9011176
    Will Barron
    Keymaster
    Apr 14, 2023
    Will Barron Apr 14, 2023

    Hey Kevin. What is the question mate? 🙂

    #9011184
    Kevin Steward
    Participant
    Apr 14, 2023
    Kevin Steward Apr 14, 2023

    Ah my bad Will — Is there anything I can add or subtract to my response? I want to get an idea of their commitment and timing

    #9011202
    Michael Stone
    Participant
    Apr 17, 2023
    Michael Stone Apr 17, 2023

    Ah my bad Will — Is there anything I can add or subtract to my response? I want to get an idea of their commitment and timing

    I don’t think I’d add anything to that email. I might want to book a meeting with them rather than leaving the conversation to float along over email.

    #9011214
    Will Barron
    Keymaster
    Apr 18, 2023
    Will Barron Apr 18, 2023

    Ah my bad Will — Is there anything I can add or subtract to my response? I want to get an idea of their commitment and timing

    I’d keep the idea but make it more conversational. It sounds a little bit fuck you right now.

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