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    Choosing Between Emails
    Sam Randazzo
    Participant
    Dec 23, 2021

    Hello Everyone, Happy Holidays!

    I am in a unique position in that I am off for a few weeks, So decided to focus on getting as much of this course done as possible and hit the ground running over the new year.

    In training modules Value proposition and cold email, they recommend an email strategy to start with. It is sending out a value statement to confirm it is correct or a cold email template based on the module.

    Which one would you recommend to start with?

    I will also say I have one client and can not do too much on telling people who I have worked with, and there are a lot of NDA involved when we work with brands. There are some I am allowed to though mainly our case studies on our website.

    Value Statment

    CEOS/Owners Of E-commerce Brands

    Our – Strategic Service
    Helps – CEOS Of E-commerce Brands
    Who wants to – have Consistent and secure growth online
    by – Leveraging our AI to find convertible customers
    and – reducing precious time and money, they spend on ineffective ads
    unlike- traditional agencies who just create ads based on what may or may not have worked for other companies, they worked with in the past.

    Subject Line: A.I Marketing drives business to Predictable Growth

    Hi (name)
    Monkedia recently worked with (name), he is in the (industry) like you.
    They had tried doing the marketing themselves and even brought in an agency, but in the end, their ads were failing to grow their brand.
    They went from losing money on ads to working with us & scaling their business to a size they could have only dreamed of.
    All by working with our A.I driven the system to scale with confidence.
    Does it make sense to jump on a quick call to see if you can use this system too?
    Cheers,

    #5509240
    Jan Oda-Biro
    Participant
    Dec 29, 2021
    Jan Oda-Biro Dec 29, 2021

    What’s your companies website Sam? I’m sure Will can tell you if those case studies will be enough rather than trying to create your own but we need to see it.

    The email looks great! I’d work on the first line. Something like “Monkedia recently worked with [name]. You’re in the [industry] too, right?”

    The subject line looks like a corporate marketing email blast though.

    It is sending out a value statement to confirm it is correct or a cold email template based on the module.

    I think it’s one and the same. Send the email to confirm your value proposition and don’t sent too many until you know it’s what the market wants.

    Then use the same structure for your email campaign.

    #5509244
    Sam Randazzo
    Participant
    Jan 3, 2022
    Sam Randazzo Jan 3, 2022

    Hey Jan,

    I appreciate you taking the time to help, and sorry for the late response; I was off on holiday.

    My companies website is http://www.,monkedia.com.

    Thanks for the information; I will start with a smaller sample size then build up based on the market’s response.

    Cheers,

    #5509247
    Sam Randazzo
    Participant
    Jan 4, 2022
    Sam Randazzo Jan 4, 2022

    Hey Jan,

    adjusted my email and was wondering if you wouldn’t mind taking a look at it?

    Cheers,

    Hi (name)
    Monkedia recently worked with NAME. You’re in the INDUSTRY too, right?”
    Like them, we worked with companies who have tried doing the marketing themselves and even brought in an agency, but in the end, their ads were failing to grow their brand.
    We have helped companies like greenlight increase their customer base by over 3000% within 18 months.
    All by working with our A.I driven system to scale with confidence.
    Does it make sense to jump on a quick call to see if you can use this system too?
    Cheers,

    #6009253
    Will Barron
    Keymaster
    Jan 7, 2022
    Will Barron Jan 7, 2022

    I’d change the structure of the email slightly but you’re on the right track.

    Hi (name)

    Monkedia recently worked with [NAME].

    You’re in the [INDUSTRY] too, right?

    We helped [NAME] increase their customer base by [SPECIFIC RESULT].

    They tried [SPECIFIC MARKETING STRATEGY] themselves and even brought in an agency to help but they found it tough.

    They found success when we came in and did all the hard work for them.

    Does it make sense to jump on a quick call and I can explain how we helped them achieve [GOAL]

    Cheers…

    Remember, this is just the first email. No problem if you don’t get a reply, you can continue to sell to them over time so don’t over think it.

    #6009257
    Sam Randazzo
    Participant
    Jan 8, 2022
    Sam Randazzo Jan 8, 2022

    Thanks Will!

    I will go through our case studies at work and use this to create some great emails!

    Cheers,

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