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  • #9011164
    Cadence.v1_ Cold-Email.v2
    Abhijeet Sarkar
    Participant
    Apr 14, 2023

    Hey guys,

    Looking to get your feedback on this email. It feels a bit long, if you can think of ways to trim it that would be awesome!

    {{FIRST_NAME}}​,

     

    It looks like {{COMPANY}} is poised for growth given {{RECENT NEWS}}.

     

    As you know, growth brings headaches for finance: piecing together data from different places to build plans, budgets, and reports in Excel.
    My name’s Abhijeet (Ab), I’m the Founder & CEO of TypeSift, and we help finance teams use automation to build plans & KPIs from disconnected data.

     

    Is your team getting frustrated moving, cleaning and blending data from different systems in Excel? We’ve helped companies like Bardstown Bourbon, Junopharm, and Freshii eliminate slow, painful, and manual work by automating data blending, building KPI dashboards, and providing planning tools for the organization.
    {{FIRST_NAME}}, do you feel the pain of disconnected data, and does it make sense to schedule a call to see if we can help?
    #9011182
    Abhijeet Sarkar
    Participant
    Apr 14, 2023
    Abhijeet Sarkar Apr 14, 2023

    Gave it another try after yesterday’s Coaching Call:

    SUBJECT: {{FIRST_NAME}} – spreadsheet hell?

    {{FIRST_NAME}},

     

    It looks like {{COMPANY}} is poised for growth with {{NEWS}}. That’s exciting…

     

    But probably means more late nights in Excel building complex reports and plans.

     

    My name’s Abhijeet (Ab), I’m the Founder & CEO of TypeSift. We help CFOs manage high growth by centralizing data from disconnected systems to build dashboards and plans.

     

    Before TypeSift, companies like Bardstown Bourbon, Junopharm and Cashew Coast did slow, painful, and manual reporting / planning in Excel. We used TypeSift to automate data collection and cleaning, build KPI dashboards, and streamline planning across the org.

     

    Alan, is the pain of disconnected data making your life harder, and does it make sense to schedule a call to see if we can help?
    #9011183
    Abhijeet Sarkar
    Participant
    Apr 14, 2023
    Abhijeet Sarkar Apr 14, 2023
    Once more:
    {{FIRST_NAME}}​,

     

    It looks like {{COMPANY}} is poised for growth with {{NEWS}}. That’s exciting…

     

    But it probably means more late nights in Excel building complex plans and reports.

     

    My name’s Abhijeet (Ab), I’m the Founder & CEO of TypeSift. We help CFOs build budgets & dashboards from disconnected data.

     

    Before TypeSift, companies like Bardstown Bourbon, Junopharm and Cashew Coast did slow, painful, and manual reporting / planning in Excel. We used TypeSift to automate data collection and cleaning, build KPI dashboards, and create integrated plan models.

     

    {{FIRST_NAME}}, is the pain of disconnected data making your life harder, and does it make sense to schedule a call to see if we can help?
    #9011203
    Michael Stone
    Participant
    Apr 17, 2023
    Michael Stone Apr 17, 2023

    Are these three separate emails or evolutions of the same one?

    #9011204
    Abhijeet Sarkar
    Participant
    Apr 17, 2023
    Abhijeet Sarkar Apr 17, 2023

    All evolutions of the same. Sorry didn’t know how to delete / edit my previous posts.

    #9011206
    Michael Stone
    Participant
    Apr 17, 2023
    Michael Stone Apr 17, 2023

    Ah that makes a lot more sense than Abhijeet.

    In the last email I would try and cull some words. Here is my attempt to update it (I’m sure Will shall be along to cut even more of it lol).

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    {FIRST_NAME}}​,

    It looks like {{COMPANY}} is poised for growth with {{NEWS}}.

    Probably means more late nights in Excel building complex reports :(.

    We help CFOs build budgets & dashboards from disconnected data.

    Before TypeSift, companies like Bardstown Bourbon and Cashew Coast did slow, painful, and manual reporting in Excel.

    TypeSift automates data collection, builds KPI dashboards, and creates integrated plan models.

    If disconnected data making your life harder would it make sense to schedule a call to see if we can help?

    #9011207
    Abhijeet Sarkar
    Participant
    Apr 17, 2023
    Abhijeet Sarkar Apr 17, 2023

    Already way better. Sometimes just needs another pair of eyes. Thank you!

    #9011208
    Michael Stone
    Participant
    Apr 17, 2023
    Michael Stone Apr 17, 2023

    Already way better. Sometimes just needs another pair of eyes. Thank you!

    You’re welcome! Also, I don’t have a way to delete/edit posts either.

    #9011213
    Will Barron
    Keymaster
    Apr 18, 2023
    Will Barron Apr 18, 2023

    Good work Michael! Here’s my small revisions –

    Hi {FIRST_NAME}}​,

    With {{NEWS}} it looks like {{COMPANY}} is poised for some rapid growth.

    That probably means some impending late nights in Excel building complex reports.

    We take Excel out of the picture and help CFOs build budgets & dashboards from disconnected data.

    Before TypeSift, companies like Bardstown Bourbon and Cashew Coast did slow, painful, and manual reporting.

    Would it make sense to jump on a very quick call to see if we can help during your growth?

    Thanks,

    Abhitjeet

    #9011218
    Abhijeet Sarkar
    Participant
    Apr 19, 2023
    Abhijeet Sarkar Apr 19, 2023

    This is fantastic. Thank you!

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