Sep 30, 2024
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Will Barron
Keymaster
Sep 30, 2024
Will Barron
Sep 30, 2024
For the first one you can remove some words –
We provide Learning professionals with a tailored Learning Management System that scales perfectly with their needs. This results in a cost-efficiencies and superior user experience.
Can it be re-famed as “I help X person, solve Y problem, in Z way?”
People buy software to solve problems. The more you can frame your software as a way to solve a problem rather than a bunch of code, the easier it is for people to emotionally buy into it.
The second value proposition is pretty good. Well done mate.