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Will Barron
Keymaster
Jul 29, 2024
Will Barron Jul 29, 2024

Hey Brook,

Image looks great.

Banner I think could be better leveraged if you share your value proposition in there + and trust factors that you have (review ratings, number of customers etc).

Your headline value proposition makes sense but I wonder if it could be simplified? –

Helping finance professionals serve clients not yet ready for advanced planning and advisory.

For the about section, focus on the buyer rather than yourself. So rather than “My expertise” it could be “How I can help”.

You’ve a bunch of followers which is awesome.

Otherwise you’ve a really solid profile.

The only thing I’d add would be a featured post or a second within the about area on how to contact you if a prospect his your profile page and wants to connect.