Email 1
I’d probably simplify the CTA.
Would it make sense to jump on a quick call to see if we could reduce the burden of giving recommendations?
Email 2
I’d also simplify the middle of this one. It sounds a little “lawyery” which might be what you’re going for.
We help buyer advocates’ refer to a Conveyancer that acts efficiency by ensuring referred leads are contacted within 2 hours.
We also promise a 48 hour turnaround for the preparation of new contracts of sale for sellers and for contract reviews.
Email 3
Same as the others. Think about saying the same thing but in as few words as possible.
Hi Munro,
The average Conveyancer will be able to complete most property transactions.
But when things get complex, they will fail and your clients will be looking to you for answers.
At Bond Property Lawyers we have qualified Property Lawyers able to support our Conveyancers at any point of the transaction should it be required.
Would it make sense to jump on a call to see if this depth of knowledge could be an asset to your clients?
Kind Regards, Stuart