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Will Barron
Keymaster
May 8, 2024
Will Barron May 8, 2024

Hey Tim, I’ve moved your post to the Asset Review section of the platform.

I help VP’s of Sales Operations increase sales performance by providing a relatable learning experience at the point of need.

“relatable learning experience” sounds like corporate gobbledygook. How can you say the same thing in really simple terms?

You hit on the key desire of VPS though which is the increase in sales performance.

I help CLO’s increase customer loyalty by providing a customized learning platform.

Can you show that you increase customer loyatly by X%? Or otherwise stick a number in the value prop?

Do CLO’s really care about customer loyalty? i.e. is that a key benchmark that they are targeted on?