[name] – Struggling with data quality?
I’d probably just do –
NAME – Data quality?
People don’t want to be told that they’re struggling, even if they know they are.
Same thing for the first line of the email –
Heads of data who manage lots of SKU’s tell me it’s a challenge to manage poor quality data.
Finally I’d break the second line into a couple of sentences and simplify by removing a few words to help with the legibility –
We improve data quality by streamlining the collection of data from multiple sources. We work differently to typical technologies and so it’s super easy to implement.
