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Will Barron
Keymaster
Feb 5, 2024
Will Barron Feb 5, 2024

Hey Brian, decent first attempt. Couple of notes –

  • Simplify – Remove anything that doesn’t need to be there for the message to be understood.
  • Make it conversational –  You should be able to say your value prop, out loud, without sounding weird if someone asked you “what do you do?”

For example –

I help tech founders find the right candidates, fast, via an in-depth understanding their companies needs.