Not sure what’s going on with formatting. See our link below to our cadence. SIMVANA Email Cadence
Hey Desmond. I’ve given you some feedback in yellow highlights in the doc.
Some general notes –
- The only benefit mentioned is time saving. Does the value do deeper than that?
- Each email should focus on what the specific person you’re messing will get out of jumping on the phone with you.
- Probably going to need more than 5 cold emails + break up email to get all the meetings from the list.
- Do you guys have any videos/assets that can be offered in an email to generate a response? i.e. “Hi NAME, got a video demo of how X works. Be useful if I send it over?”
- The content isn’t bad, it’s just not all that compelling. Think about the effects of not having enough time and dig into that rather than talking about surface level issues.
Hope that helps.
Iterate and send over and I’ll take another look.
