Dec 11, 2023
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Will Barron
Keymaster
Dec 11, 2023
Will Barron
Dec 11, 2023
The first line sounds familiar :P.
I’d put the guarantee in the first line. That’s the most powerful part of the VP.
“Web Genius helps Kiwi (small/medium) businesses find more customers and make more sales, guaranteed.”
Other than that the second one seems slightly more compelling.