You’re on the right tracks here. Even though I’ve given you a lot of feedback here, these emails are night and day better than the one you showed me the other week that had no responses.
You’ve gone from a 2/10 to a 6/10 in weeks which is awesome.
Do another couple of revisions here and then lets get that cadence started.
Final thought is that you’re going to need more than 4x steps (days) in your cadence I imagine to get the most of your cadence. No problem, we can work on that over time.