Oct 14, 2023
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Subject header: Name, what if you could reduce residents’ financial hardship?
- Name – Reduce financial hardship?
- Name – Immediately reduce hardship?
Subject header: Name – How to easily help your customers in need
- Name – Help those in need
- Name – Quick impact?
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Our financial support portal helps housing directors reduce residents’ financial hardship by streamlining the complex process of finding and applying for support, unlike the current fragmented landscape that can cause everyone confusion. We’ve been working with partners such as Lambeth Council and the Royal British Legion to secure over £6m in grants for residents in need.
Simplify, include the buyers desire and less “blocks” of text –
Our support tool helps housing directors reduce residents’ financial hardship by streamlining the complex process of finding and applying for support.
This is unlike other fragmented tools that cause so much confusion for everyone involved.
We’ve been working with partners such as Lambeth Council and the Royal British Legion to rapidly secure over £6m in grants for residents in need.
Would it make sense to find out more over a short call?
Make sense to find out what exactly?
Would it make sense to see if we can help you secure more grants, with far less hassle?
Body 2
Great email.
Would it make sense to find out more over a short call?
They don’t want to know “how” they want to know if you can do the same for them –
Would it make sense to jump on a quick call and I’ll explain if we can do the same for X?
