Hey Eshan, great effort.
Is there anything else that you can add to make it more irresistible?
“We help salespeople find and close more sales” is decent.
But then I add “in 30 days or your money back” and it becomes irresistible.
These are just made up but they’ll give you an idea –
- “We help office managers increase their productivity by freeing them from office cleaning duties using our automated systems.”
- “We help showroom managers close more 7% more customers by ensuring their showroom is immaculate”
- “We help office managers reduce the stress of managing cleaning services by providing an all-in-one cleaning platform”.
No worries if there’s nothing you can add to your value props. But that little bit of sparkle can make a big difference.
