Eli A
Sep 25, 2023
Eli A Sep 25, 2023

Thanks so much for the feedback Will! Makes sense. Here goes number 3:


Context: Chariman, Executive VP, & Director of Technology  High Voltage, Inc.

Trigger Event: None

Subject Line: HV+CRM=Revenue


Hey Stephen,

Navigating market competition while driving revenue is no walk in the park.

Our electrical component clients like Boston Scientific, see a 29% increase in sales while cutting costs by 25% on average with our tech.

Open to discussing if you could achieve similar results Stephen?




(BTW, do you think I should leverage the name “Salesforce” more in my emails for further trust and social proof? Maybe something like: “Our Salesforce clients like…”?