You’re getting the hang of it now! This is transformational VS the original emails.
Few tweaks –
- Split architects and engineers into two cadences so the email is much more specific.
- Stand behind your message (
could causeVS do cause) - What specifically causes the project delays? That would make the message more targeted. We want the prospect to go “ah, that’s what I’m suffering with” when they read our email.
Hi NAME,
Just noticed your focus on team collaboration and that you’re delivering impressive projects in the UK, USA and Middle East.
Architects often have LAN/WAN bottlenecks that cause major project delays.
We recently helped Harry Dobbs increase their network performance by 80%, enabling them to better collaborate across global locations.
Would it make sense to jump on a quick call to see if we can do the same for you?
Thanks,
Avtar
PS – Good to see you added me to your cadence. But you put my first and second name in the subject line (first name only) and you spelt my surname wrong.
Don’t let silly mistakes mess up what otherwise would be a great email.
