Good work Michael! Here’s my small revisions –
Hi {FIRST_NAME}},
With {{NEWS}} it looks like {{COMPANY}} is poised for some rapid growth.
That probably means some impending late nights in Excel building complex reports.
We take Excel out of the picture and help CFOs build budgets & dashboards from disconnected data.
Before TypeSift, companies like Bardstown Bourbon and Cashew Coast did slow, painful, and manual reporting.
Would it make sense to jump on a very quick call to see if we can help during your growth?
Thanks,
Abhitjeet
