Hey Stuart, here are some thoughts –
When consumers trust your brand, research has shown that 46% would happily pay more for a product or service.
Can you personalize this? There’s more training coming in the next few weeks on personalizing first lines but it’s becoming increasingly important.
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Can you reframe this from “we do X” to “you’ll get Y”?
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I’m not sure you need this line if you make the previous one more direct.
Worth a look?
At the beginning of your cadence (emails 1-2) I’d recommend a stronger call to action to book a call. That catches all the people who are interested and don’t want to go back and forth over email.
Emails after this point can be a softer CTA.