Will Barron
Dec 20, 2022
Will Barron Dec 20, 2022

This is too long but the correct structure.

Email this to yourself and read it on your phone (preferably whilst moving from one meeting to another) and it’s difficult to get through.

Try (assuming the person you’re emailing is in the same industry to Adidas?) –

Hi Mark,

I’m working with Adidas and they’ve finding that digital conversion plummeted after COVID.

Our platform helps heads of eCommerce generate more sales by increasing on-page conversion rates.

It’s a single platform that replaces a bunch of tools so your team can iterate faster.

We helped Adidas increase their conversions by 35.31%.

Can I share a little more about how we did it?