Oct 28, 2022
#7010280
Will Barron
Keymaster
Oct 28, 2022
Will Barron
Oct 28, 2022
You’re making assumptions that we’re going to into a recession and that growing will be tough. Probably true but you don’t know that until you speak with the prospect.
This is too broad and not specific enough to the prospect for them to go “ah, this person has done some research and might be able to solve I problem I have”.
I think you need to simplify this further Tom.
What’s your one line value prop from the workshop? i.e. We help X, do Y with Z.
Lets build an email from that.