Hi Jeremie! Wow it looks like you’re doing some real good in the world which is amazing!
I think your email is slightly long winded and not really focused on what the buyer is going to get. Here is how I’d change it –
Subject: [NAME] – Amplify your marketing spend
Hi [NAME],
We just worked with BP and delivered [TANGIBLE VALUE FOR PROSPECT].
The bit that is different?
With every product used, a child’s life in Zimbabwe is transformed with the gift of a free solar light.
You get videos like the one below to boost your branding efforts too –
[VIDEO]
A huge win for everyone!
Does it make sense to jump on a call to see if we can do the same for [COMPANY NAME]?
Thanks,
