Angela Biddinger
Aug 25, 2022
Angela Biddinger Aug 25, 2022

Hi Jeremie! Wow it looks like you’re doing some real good in the world which is amazing!

I think your email is slightly long winded and not really focused on what the buyer is going to get. Here is how I’d change it –

Subject: [NAME] – Amplify your marketing spend

Hi [NAME],

We just worked with BP and delivered [TANGIBLE VALUE FOR PROSPECT].

The bit that is different?

With every product used, a child’s life in Zimbabwe is transformed with the gift of a free solar light.

You get videos like the one below to boost your branding efforts too –


A huge win for everyone!

Does it make sense to jump on a call to see if we can do the same for [COMPANY NAME]?