Jul 14, 2022
Hi Jacky,
Thanks for the feedback and as harsh as it might have been it’s genuinely welcomed.
I agree it’s too long, I’m an advocate for not sending prospects long emails , but I wanted to experiment with this format and try and appeal to the emotional side of the prospects brain not the logical side.
I recognise that whilst I may have good ideas, the execution needs works which is ultimately why I’m here lol.
I’ve worked on a new value prop email, would welcome your feedback once I post it.
Dele
