Hi Dele and welcome!
Your email is too damn long,
If a random person stopped you on the street and said all that, how would you respond? I bet you’d be trying your best to get away from them before they even got to the questions.
This is the most painful bit…
but being honest I don’t know anything about your current situation.
Why should someone SPEND time with you, that they can never get back when you haven’t taken the time to do your research to what their problems might be?
My advise is to work on the emailing training here in the Academy as that will explain the issues and give you some templates to start from.
Sorry if that was harsh feedback but it’s what I wish I’d been told when I first got into sales 10 years ago :).