This is great! Leaning into my creative writing background I’d suggest trying to rework it so all the sentences don’t start with “I”.
So rather than “I worked as a manager…” you could do “The story started with a management role…”.
This is great! Leaning into my creative writing background I’d suggest trying to rework it so all the sentences don’t start with “I”.
So rather than “I worked as a manager…” you could do “The story started with a management role…”.
